Better Late Than Never
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Randall thinks Lindsay Taylor is sexy as hell, but she stays clear because he’s the boss’ son. When Lindsay is in a car accident, Randy throws all his rules out the window to be at her side. They share a heated kiss, but for the weeks she’s on temporary leave Lindsay ignores his calls. Now that it’s her first day back at work, he plans to convince her they’re meant to be together. When he finally gets her alone, he shows her all the physical pleasures she’s been missing out on, heating up the bedroom to scorching levels.
Customer Reviews ::
Almost great... - Clarrissa L. Zamora - Tucson arizona
First what I liked...there was good flow. The discussion between them was believable and articulate. The sex scene was well described. Crude language? Hey, its an erotica...there are supposed to be sexual words and a tad crudeness for the badness, the hotness. In the elevator in the first scene the story showed him monologuing to himself.. some guys think freely in that vein so the language was totally appropraite.
What disappointed me in the story was the lack of background...how did she get into an accident..whose father was his , what company did they work for...details...invovle me more please. And what really bummed me out was the author had this total dominate attitude in the guy going on and here I was expecting a little dominance, a little B/D. The female character even said she hoped he wouldn't be gentle...she wanted rough...I wanted rough... I went looking for rough...I got a puff ball...a limp episode...she took the lead, he took a bottom place...ughhh. Lots of potential, the author can write well, but needs to follow up and follow through next time. I will see if the next book is better, the author has great potential as I said.
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